[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-teas-p2mp-loose-path-reopt-08

Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com> Mon, 16 January 2017 16:45 UTC

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Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-teas-p2mp-loose-path-reopt-??
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 2017-01-16
IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-17
IESG Telechat date: 2017-02-02

Summary:

This document is ready. 

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 

I trust the RFC Editor for a final pass on the document to detect
possible syntax and grammar issues.