[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12
David Schinazi via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 12 March 2019 22:20 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12
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Reviewer: David Schinazi Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12 Reviewer: David Schinazi Review Date: 2019-03-12 IETF LC End Date: 2019-03-20 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: I am not knowledgeable in this domain so this review only focused on style. Document reads nicely, is well ordered and defines its terminology clearly. Looks great from a form perspective. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: None
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