[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12

David Schinazi via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 12 March 2019 22:20 UTC

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Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12
Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review Date: 2019-03-12
IETF LC End Date: 2019-03-20
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: I am not knowledgeable in this domain so this review
only focused on style. Document reads nicely, is well ordered
and defines its terminology clearly. Looks great from a form perspective.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: None