[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcweb-rtcp-xr-metrics-08

Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com> Mon, 19 February 2018 18:47 UTC

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Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcweb-rtcp-xr-metrics-08
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2018-02-19
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-23
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready for publication as an Informational RFC, but with nits to
consider before publication

The document argues to include things in the W3C statistics API in the last
paragraph of 5.2.2. Section 7 seems to say those have been included already. It
would be good to rework both of these mentions to reflect what's true at the
time of the publication of the RFC, in a way that the text will make sense when
read years from now.