Re: [Gen-art] Last Call review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-reply-mode-simple-03
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Last Call review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-reply-mode-simple-03
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Thank you Tom! On 30 Aug 2015, at 09:54, Nobo Akiya <nobo.akiya.dev@gmail.com> wrote: > Hello Tom, > > Many thank you for reviewing this document. > > Please see replies in-line with [NOBO]. > > On Sun, Aug 23, 2015 at 11:44 PM, Tom Taylor <tom.taylor.stds@gmail.com> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-reply-mode-simple-03 > Reviewer: Tom Taylor > Review Date: 2015-08-21 > IETF LC End Date: 2015-09-03 > IESG Telechat date: TBD > > Summary: Ready with nits. A number of missing "the"s noted but left to the RFC Editor. > > > [NOBO] I will have one of the native English speakers go through the document to add missing "the"s. > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > > IDNits notes that draft-ietf-mpls-proxy-lsp-ping has now been published as RFC 7555. > > > [NOBO] Thanks, I have updated the reference to RFC 7555. > > Sec. 3, third line: s/carry ordered/carry an ordered/ > > > [NOBO] Accepted. > > Sec. 3.2, paragraph following bullet 9: > s/The responder LSR is to select/The responder LSR MUST (SHOULD?) select/ > Begin next sentence with "The". > > [NOBO] Good comment. Yes I agree that we should use "SHOULD" here. "MUST" is probably ok, but I can see users potentially arguing for local policies to be given precedence, hence "SHOULD" is the right way to go. > > I have made changes in my local copy. There is another set of review comments that came in. Once those are also addressed, I will publish the document. > > Again, thank you for reviewing the document Tom! > > Regards, > Nobo > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art