[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip-05
Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 09 March 2020 14:43 UTC
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Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-detnet-ip-?? Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2020-03-09 IETF LC End Date: 2020-03-13 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. In section 3 the paragraph before the last one " the appropriate DetNet flow-specific information and ensures that the receives the proper traffic treatment within the domain", looks to me that it should be "that the flow receives ..." 2. In section 6 I could not parse the second level bullet "When the DSCP field is used in flow identification, a list of field values that may be used by a specific flow."
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