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Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp-08.txt

"Ram Mohan R (rmohanr)" <rmohanr@cisco.com> Wed, 18 November 2015 08:22 UTC

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From: "Ram Mohan R (rmohanr)" <rmohanr@cisco.com>
To: Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Hi Francis,

Thanks for your feedback. I will address all your nits.

Regards,
Ram

-----Original Message-----
From: Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr>
Date: Wednesday, 18 November 2015 at 1:37 PM
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Subject: review of draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp-08.txt

>I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
>by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
>like any other last call comments.
>
>For more information, please see the FAQ at
>
><http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>
>Document: draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp-08.txt
>Reviewer: Francis Dupont
>Review Date: 20151112
>IETF LC End Date: 20151117
>IESG Telechat date: 20151203
>
>Summary: Ready
>
>Major issues: None
>
>Minor issues: None
>
>Nits/editorial comments:
>  (very minor)
>  - 3.1.1 figure 1 page 5: a= fingerprint1 -> a=fingerprint1
>
>  - 7 page 9: comments,suggestions, -> comments, suggestions,
>
>  - Authors' Addresses page 11: as the first two authors work at
>   the same place one can expect exactly the same address (:-)
>
>Regards
>
>Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr

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