Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mpls-sfc-encapsulation-03

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 13 March 2019 17:02 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mpls-sfc-encapsulation-03
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Meral, thanks for your review. Andy, thanks for your response. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Feb 28, 2019, at 10:46 AM, Andrew G. Malis <agmalis@gmail.com> wrote:
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> Meral,
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> Thanks for your review! I've fixed that typo in the next revision.
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> Cheers,
> Andy
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> On Mon, Feb 25, 2019 at 2:02 PM Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com <mailto:meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>> wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
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> For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>>.
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> Document: draft-ietf-mpls-sfc-encapsulation-03
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> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
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> Review Date: 2019-02-25
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> IETF LC End Date: 2019-02-26
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> IESG Telechat date: NA
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> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC, no other comments than those already addressed on the mailing list.
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> -[Page 3], Section 2, "SFF (i.e, " -----> "SFF (i.e., "
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> Best Regards,
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> Meral
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> Meral Shirazipour
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> Ericsson Research
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