Re: [Gen-art] [DNSOP] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-algorithm-update-07

[Paul Wouters <[e-mail]>]

On Mon, 8 Apr 2019, Michael Sinatra wrote:

> On 2019-04-06 02:16, Peter Yee via Datatracker wrote:
>
>> Page 9, Section 8, 2nd paragraph: append a comma after "Hoffman".  "Imminent"
>> in this sentence is probably not the word you want in document at time of
>> publication, although it's fine to prod the named individuals into submitted
>> input prior to publication.
>
> As one of the "imminent" reviewers, I had previously had some concerns
> around some of the language of the recommendations.  The latest few
> drafts have settled those concerns, in concert with discussions with
> other folks in the WG and outside.  I think the document is ready to go,
> pending resolution of the various nits identified in the Genart review.

I will be working on all the input we got from the IESG and others. Thanks!

The word "imminent" was a joke in the draft, as it referred to people
who had promised to review the document upon adoption. A little nudge
to keep them honest. It should have been removed after the -00 version :)

Paul