Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8920bis-01

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Thu, 25 May 2023 06:23 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
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Date: Thu, 25 May 2023 09:23:03 +0300
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Roni, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars


> On Apr 25, 2023, at 09:35, Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8920bis-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2023-04-24
> IETF LC End Date: 2023-05-04
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.
> 
> I find that the new text about zero-length Application Identifier Bit Masks
> provide better guidance then the previous one
> 
> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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