[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review: draft-ietf-idr-fsm-subcode-02

Mary Barnes <mary.ietf.barnes@gmail.com> Wed, 30 November 2011 20:54 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-idr-fsm-subcode-02
Reviewer:  Mary Barnes
Review Date:  30 November 2011
IETF LC End Date:  12 December 2011

Summary:  Ready with nits


- There are articles (e.g., "the") missing in quite a few of the
sentences, however, the RFC editor should be able to easily fix those.