[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-6lowpan-nd-18

Richard L. Barnes <rbarnes@bbn.com> Fri, 30 December 2011 22:11 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on 
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Document: draft-ietf-6lowpan-nd-18
Reviewer: Richard Barnes
Review Date: 30 December 2011
IETF LC End Date: -
IESG Telechat date: (if known) 5 January 2012

Summary:
Ready, with one editorial nit.

The phrase "transitive link" is unfamiliar to me.  A definition would be helpful.