[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-yang-09

Mohit Sethi via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sat, 20 March 2021 10:24 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-yang-09

Reviewer: Mohit Sethi
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-yang-09
Reviewer: Mohit Sethi
Review Date: 2021-03-20
IETF LC End Date: 2021-03-29
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document defines a TACACS+ YANG module for configuring TACACS+
clients so that they can use TACACS+ servers as an alternative to RADIUS
servers or local user configuration.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
Perhaps expand TACACS+ on first usage. The same for FIB. Perhaps add the
acronym AAA to the first usage of Authentication, Authorization and Accounting

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-o… Mohit Sethi via Datatracker
Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Wubo (lana)
Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review… Lars Eggert