[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8919bis-01
Robert Sparks via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 27 April 2023 20:09 UTC
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Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8919bis-01 Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review Date: 2023-04-27 IETF LC End Date: 2023-05-03 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Ready for publication as a proposed standard rfc but with nits to consider before publication. Nits: 1) It would be nice to explain when/how the registries got renamed? 2) Please reconsider the link to the mailarchive in the RFC. Put it in the shepherd writeup or in the history in the datatracker as a comment (chairs can do this). Otherwise it adds to the list of URLs that we have to keep alive forever.
- [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-l… Robert Sparks via Datatracker
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… John Scudder
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Robert Sparks
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
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- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Lars Eggert