Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis-03

"Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com> Sun, 09 December 2018 23:08 UTC

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From: "Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com>
To: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>, "draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis.all@ietf.org>
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Paul -

Thanx for the careful review and the kind words.

   Les


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>;
> Sent: Sunday, December 09, 2018 12:06 PM
> To: draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis.all@ietf.org
> Cc: General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>;
> Subject: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis-03
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the
> IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other
> last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at
> <​http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis-03
> Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
> Review Date: 2018-12-09
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-12-12
> IESG Telechat date: ?
> 
> Summary:
> 
> This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.
> 
> Issues: None
> 
> It was very easy to review this document because a diff with RFC7810
> showed me everything of note, and this was consistent with Appendix A.
> 
> Changing an RFC in a way that is not backwards compatible is
> problematic, but the authors have clearly considered the issues and find
> this the best of bad alternatives.
> 
> The reference to draft-ietf-idr-te-pm-bgp-14 is now out of date. I'm not
> raising it as a nit because chasing references to drafts is futile and
> this will be fixed by the editor.