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Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mibs-to-ieee80231-01.txt

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@ericsson.com> Tue, 25 November 2014 15:54 UTC

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From: Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@ericsson.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mibs-to-ieee80231-01.txt
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Thanks for the review, Francis.

Jari

On 07 Nov 2014, at 10:18, Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> 
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-mibs-to-ieee80231-01.txt
> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
> Review Date: 20141104
> IETF LC End Date: 20141106
> IESG Telechat date: 20141125
> 
> Summary: Ready
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> - ToC page 2 and 7 page 5: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
>  (BTW what is the favorite spelling in Canada: UK or US one?)
> 
> Regards
> 
> Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
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