[Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture-09

Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 29 September 2022 18:29 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture-09

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review result: Almost Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-mls-architecture-09

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2022-09-29
IETF LC End Date: 2022-09-28
IESG Telechat date: NA

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC, no other
comment than those on the list.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

[Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-mls-a… Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker
Re: [Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-m… Lars Eggert