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"Brian Weis (bew)" <bew@cisco.com> Fri, 28 October 2016 16:12 UTC

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From: "Brian Weis (bew)" <bew@cisco.com>
To: "Vijay K.Gurbani" <vijay.gurbani@nokia-bell-labs.com>
Thread-Topic: Gen-ART review of draft-weis-gdoi-iec62351-9-08
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Hi Vijay,

Thanks for your review. We’ve added a “:” to the end of each term being defined.

Brian

> On Oct 27, 2016, at 6:11 AM, Vijay K.Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@nokia-bell-labs.com> wrote:
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> Document: draft-weis-gdoi-iec62351-9-08
> Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
> Review Date: Oct-27-2016
> IETF LC End Date: Unknown
> IESG Telechat date: Oct-27-2016
> 
> This document is ready as an Proposed Standard.
> 
> Major: 0
> Minor: 0
> Nits: 1
> 
> Nits:
> 1/ S1.2: Perhaps a ':' or a '-' to delimit the term being defined and
> the definition itself.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> - vijay
> -- 
> Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Nokia Networks
> 1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60563 (USA)
> Email: vkg@bell-labs.com / vijay.gurbani@nokia-bell-labs.com
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Brian Weis
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