Re: [Gen-art] [manet] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension-05

Hi Stewart,

Thanks for the prompt review.  We will wait for a few more reviews and publish a fixed document.

Many thanks,

Rick

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> Subject: [manet] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-
> extension-05
> 
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
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> Document: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-lid-extension-05
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review Date: 2019-08-06
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-15
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: A well written document with a few nits that should be looked at.
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> " The Dynamic Link Exchange Protocol (DLEP) [RFC8175] describes a"
> 
> Nits says that the "[]" brackets should be removed
> 
> ==========
> 
>   " None of the features introduced by this extension require extra
>    consideration by an implementation."
> 
> I think that should be
> 
>    "None of the features introduced by this extension require extra
>    security consideration by an implementation."
> 
> ==============
> 
> "Assign a new DLEP Extensions Registry value (TBD1) from the"
> 
> I think that should be
> 
> "Assign a new DLEP Extensions Type Values Registry value (TBD1) from the"
> 
> ==============
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