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Re: [Gen-art] [regext] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-org-10

"Linlin Zhou" <zhoulinlin@cnnic.cn> Tue, 09 October 2018 03:18 UTC

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Date: Tue, 09 Oct 2018 11:18:49 +0800
From: Linlin Zhou <zhoulinlin@cnnic.cn>
To: Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [regext] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-org-10
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Dear Stewart,
Thanks for your review. Please see my feedbacks below.

Regards,
Linlin


Linlin Zhou
 
From: Stewart Bryant
Date: 2018-10-09 00:52
To: gen-art@ietf.org
CC: draft-ietf-regext-org.all; ietf; regext
Subject: [regext] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-org-10
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready with Issues
 
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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Document: draft-ietf-regext-org-10
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2018-10-08
IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-08
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
 
Summary:
 
This is a well written document, and ready for publication.
 
Major issues: None
 
Minor issues:
The RFC 2718 normative reference is a bit strange to one that does not normally
work in this area. RFC 2718 has been obsoleted, and this is covered by it being
called out in the IETF LC. However RFC 2718 is called out because the text
requires a reference to UTF-16, and there is apparently no reference to it
other than the obsolete RFC 2718 text. This makes me wonder why this document
requires support of the format.
[Linlin] Sorry. It should be RFC2781 and will be moved to "Informative References".
 
Perhaps a comment on this might be useful to other puzzled readers.
 
In Section  3.6 the text says: "Loops SHOULD be prohibited."
[Linlin] Will be modified as "MUST".
 
I am surprised this is not a MUST, since SHOULD means that clients need to make
the test whenever they used the repository and were worried about this, whereas
MUST would mean that the server makes the test once.
 
Nits/editorial comments:
 
Nits points out an issue with the RFC2119 boiler plate and also a line too
long, but these will be fixed by the RFC Editor as a matter of course.
[Linlin] I found there are two lines are two long. They will be put into two lines, like,

S: <msg lang="en">Command completed successfully; 
S:   action pending</msg>
 
 
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