[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-08.txt
Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> Thu, 30 October 2014 11:04 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-08.txt Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov Review Date: 30 October 2014 IETF LC End Date: 24 October 2014 IESG Telechat date: 30 October 2014 Summary: Ready (with nits) Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: On page 6 the first reference to UTF-8 needs a Normative Reference.
- [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protoc… Alexey Melnikov
- Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-pr… Jari Arkko
- Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-pr… Michael Tuexen