[Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-behave-v4v6-bih-06
Wassim Haddad <wassim.haddad@ericsson.com> Tue, 04 October 2011 06:09 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-behave-v4v6-bih-06
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-behave-v4v6-bih-06 Reviewer: Wassim Haddad Review Date: October 3rd, 2011 IETF LC End Date: TBD IESG Telechat date: October 06, 2011 Summary: This document is ready to be published as a proposed standard. Major issues: None Minor issues: IMHO, it makes sense to better clarify the connection to the two RFCs 2767 and 3338 as the draft states that it "obsoletes" them in the abstract, "updates" them in the Introduction, is a "direct update to and directly derivative" from them (sub-section 1.1), then "combines and obsoletes" them in section 8. Regards, Wassim H.
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