[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-geojson-03

Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Wed, 01 June 2016 22:51 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-geojson-03
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2016-06-01
IETF LC End Date: 2016-05-31
IESG Telechat date: 2016-06-02


Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC, but I have some comments.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 3], "any thing"--typo-->"anything"

-[Page 4], KML not spelled out at first use (Keyhole Markup Language?)

-[Page 11],PIDF-LO, please spell out at first use and maybe reference RFC5139.

-[Page 11], it says
"Applications such as PIDF-LO that are sensitive to location
   uncertainty and confidence might treat ...
"
Not clear: if this is not an OK behavior, it should say "should not treat..."? If this is an ok behavior, maybe it should say "MAY treat ..."

-[Page 12], "in the the case"---typo-->"in the case"

-[Page 12], "the OGC's "http://www.opengis.net/def/crs/OGC/1.3/CRS84" [OGCURL]. "
Should the URL  be moved to reference section?

-[Page 13], "or to to have"--typo-->"or to have"

-[Page 16], "the the semantics"--typo-->"the semantics"

-[Page 18], "can not be"---->"cannot be"


Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
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