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"Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com> Tue, 05 September 2023 11:47 UTC

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From: "Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com>
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Thanks for the review, Meral. One note below.

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> Document: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-openid-??
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2023-09-04
> IETF LC End Date: 2023-09-01
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> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standard RFC, no other
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> If there are alternative proposals to OIDC to secure RDAP it would be great to
> mention them.

[SAH] That's already done in Section 3.2.1 of RFC 7481.

Scott

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