Re: [Gen-art] [GROW] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-03

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Sat, 04 May 2019 23:06 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [GROW] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-03
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On 05-May-19 06:03, Randy Bush wrote:
>> In my opinion, this document adds new requirements or at least new
>> considerations for implementations of RFC1997, I think that means it
>> updates RFC1997. I liked to see it have "Updates: 1997" metadata added and
>> appropriate statements in the Abstract and Intro. I think this requires and
>> justifies it being Standards Track.

That's a consistent approach too. One or the other, I don't care.

But not magenta, never!

    Brian
>>
>> In both the Abstract and the 2nd paragraph of the Introduction,
> 
> i have no dog in this fight.  in general, i try to focus on the protein
> of the document, and leave grammar tweaks, what form of 2119 to use,
> etc. to the rfc editor, and weighty decisions such as this to the iesg.
> 
> the bikeshed will, of course, be magenta comic sans :)
> 
> randy
>