Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc7001bis-08
Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Wed, 13 May 2015 22:27 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc7001bis-08
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Thanks, both of you. Jari On 11 May 2015, at 21:49, Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi, > > The -09 version resolves my comments completely, thanks! > > Brian > > On 08/05/2015 12:26, Murray S. Kucherawy wrote: >> On Thu, May 7, 2015 at 5:18 PM, Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com <mailto:brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>> wrote: >> >> >> It seems the author didn't see my Last Call review, so this review has not changed. >> >> >> Nope, I hadn't. Apologies for that. >> >> >> As the writeup says, this is an update to a long document that mainly resolves a >> notified erratum and some oversights in the previous version's IANA material. >> Therefore I did not review the whole document. As far as I can tell, the changes >> reflect the description in the writeup. (I assume that IANA will work with the >> author to get the registry updates exactly right.) >> >> >> Yes, that's already happening behind the scenes. >> >> >> Minor Issue: >> ------------ >> >> IMHO the "Change History" section should be summarised in a "Changes since RFC7001" >> section (rather than being deleted). >> >> >> Sure, that seems a reasonable suggestion. >> >> Nit: >> ---- >> >> 6.7. SMTP Enhanced Stauts Codes >> >> s/Stauts/Status/ >> >> >> Fixed for next version. >> >> Thanks! >> >> -MSK
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-a… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ie… Murray S. Kucherawy
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ie… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ie… Jari Arkko