Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-nottingham-rfc5785bis-08

Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net> Wed, 06 February 2019 07:21 UTC

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From: Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-nottingham-rfc5785bis-08
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Hi Erik!

> On 6 Feb 2019, at 6:10 pm, Erik Kline <ek@google.com>; wrote:
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> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> [1] I assume the URIs in 6.3 are also meant to be deleted upon publication?

Not all of them; just the ones referenced from the section that's marked for deletion.


> [2] WRT to the final lines of 5.1:
> 
>    [a] "Replace all references to RFC 5988 in that registry have been
>    replaced..." doesn't scan well, I think.
> 
>    [b] If the IANA repo in question is
>    https://www.iana.org/assignments/well-known-uris/well-known-uris.xhtml, I
>    don't see any mention of 5988 in there.

That's been removed since, as a result of another review.


> [3] Naive question: do we want a statement about reserving/agreeing to never
> allocate "example" in the .well-known space?

Good question! I'm neutral on this; does anyone have strong feelings?

Cheers,


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