Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-hokey-erp-aak-07

["Miguel A. Garcia" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Qin Wu:

As far as I remember, there is a policy in force that does not allow URLs 
in RFCs, in particular in the IANA section. I believe that the motivation 
is that URLs can change with time.

The proposal is (something around these lines):

     Further, this document instructs IANA to add a new lable in the User 
Specific Root Keys (USRK) Key Labels of the Extended Master Session Key 
(EMSK) Parameters registry, as follows:

         EAP Early-Authentication Root [e-mail]

/Miguel


On 03/02/2012 8:43, Qin Wu wrote:
> Hi, Miguel:
> I think you are looking for this registry.
> http://www.iana.org/assignments/emsk-parameters/emsk-parameters.xml
> To make clear, the proposed change is replace the OLD Text
> "
> Further, this document registers a Early authentication usage label
>     from the "USRK Key Labels" name space with a value:
>
>        EAP Early-Authentication Root [e-mail]
> "
> With the NEW Text:
> "
> Further, this document registers a Early authentication usage label
>     from the "User Specific Root Keys (USRK) Key Labels" name space maintained at
> http://www.iana.org/assignments/emsk-parameters/emsk-parameters.xml
>   with a value:
>
>        EAP Early-Authentication Root [e-mail]
> "
> Hope this addresses your comment.
>
> Regards!
> -Qin Wu
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Miguel A. Garcia"<[e-mail]>
> To: "Zhen Cao"<[e-mail]>
> Cc: "Hui Deng"<[e-mail]>;<[e-mail]>; "Stephen Farrell"<[e-mail]>; "General Area Review Team"<[e-mail]>
> Sent: Friday, February 03, 2012 3:18 PM
> Subject: Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-hokey-erp-aak-07
>
>
>> Zhen,
>>
>> The issue with IANA is double:
>>
>> On one side, you need to clearly indicate to IANA which registry they
>> need to change.
>>
>> On another side, someone reading this RFC should be able to go to
>> www.iana.org and find the registry.
>>
>> The solve both issues you don't need a reference to RFC 5295. What you
>> need to say "Extended Master Session Key (EMSK) Parameters registry" in
>> the IANA considerations section, because this is the official name by
>> which the registry is known.
>>
>> BR,
>>
>>           Miguel
>>
>> On 03/02/2012 8:11, Zhen Cao wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>>   - Another topic, Section 9 (IANA Considerations) reads:
>>>>>
>>>>>      Further, this document registers a Early authentication usage label
>>>>>      from the "USRK Key Labels" name space with a value:
>>>>>
>>>>>         EAP Early-Authentication [e-mail]
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>   I am missing the sentence to name the master registry where the USRK Key
>>>>>   Labels subregistry is stored. This is the Extended Master Session Key (EMSK)
>>>>>   Parameters registry (I guess). And probably this comment is also valid for
>>>>>   the rest of the IANA actions: the main registry is not named, and it is hard
>>>>>   to find it.
>>> [CZ]: EMSK or DSRK lable is defined in the section 8.1 "Key Lables" of
>>> RFC5295. We will add reference to RFC5295 to fix this. Thanks.
>>>
>>>>>
>>
>> --
>> Miguel A. Garcia
>> [phone]
>> Ericsson Spain

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