[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-10

Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 14 April 2019 10:42 UTC

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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Almost Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2019-04-14
IETF LC End Date: 2019-04-15
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:
1. In section 1.1 last bullet does it mean that you MUST NOT use H-PCEP on the
internet?

2. In section 3.2.1 or section 4.1 if the originator sends PCC or PCE sends an
open with P flag =0 can the response open be sent with a P flag =1 and if yes
what should be the action of the originator. I did not see any text about this
case.

Nits/editorial comments:
1. in section 1 "achild" should be " a child"
2.  Section 2.4 repeat some of the text from RFC6805 1.3.2.2 but using
different sentence structure. Is there a reason to change the wording.