Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lisp-signal-free-multicast-07

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 08 March 2018 02:37 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lisp-signal-free-multicast-07
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Thank you Roni and Dino. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Feb 26, 2018, at 3:40 PM, Dino Farinacci <farinacci@gmail.com> wrote:
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>> Nits/editorial comments:
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>> 1. in section 1 "The signal-free mechanism here proposed " should be "The
>> signal-free mechanism proposed here " 2.  in section 2 SSM is Source Specific
>> Multicast not single source 3. in section 7 bullet 5 "When the the ITR…"
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> Thanks Roni for your comments. Fixed and will be in -08.
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> Dino
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