[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-24

Pete Resnick <resnick@episteme.net> Wed, 06 February 2019 02:43 UTC

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Reviewer: Pete Resnick
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-24
Reviewer: Pete Resnick
Review Date: 2019-02-05
IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-31
IESG Telechat date: 2019-02-07

Summary:

The changes made to this version look fine to me. No concerns save the editorial comment below.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: None.

Nits/editorial comments: Section 2: Get rid of everything except the last paragraph.