[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bmwg-evpntest-07

Ines Robles via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 24 May 2021 16:24 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bmwg-evpntest-07

Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-evpntest-07
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2021-05-24
IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-24
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

This document defines methodologies for benchmarking Ethernet VPN (EVPN) and
Provider Backbone Bridging EVPN (PBB-EVPN) performance. This document is
Informational. No major issues found.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
- Check punctuation, some sentences do not start with space after period.  e.g.
page 16 "... sample.The time ..." - Some paragraphs do not start with
upper-case letter. e.g. page 10, "confirm the DUT..." - I would expand PBB-EVPN
the first time used.  Perhaps in the introduction, "Provider Backbone Bridging
EVPN (PBB-EVPN) is defined in RFC 7623, discussing how can be combined with
EVPNs to provide a new/combined solution...."

Thank you for this document,

Ines

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-b… Ines Robles via Datatracker
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