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[2.102.219.250]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id c13sm19047455eeb.7.2012.06.08.00.33.34 (version=SSLv3 cipher=OTHER); Fri, 08 Jun 2012 00:33:35 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: <4FD1AAC6.1000308@gmail.com> Date: Fri, 08 Jun 2012 08:33:26 +0100 From: Brian E Carpenter Organization: University of Auckland User-Agent: Thunderbird 2.0.0.6 (Windows/20070728) MIME-Version: 1.0 To: General Area Review Team , Eric Rescorla , "Joseph A. Salowey" , Sean Turner Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="------------030307090501060706080506" Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of RFC2818 X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.12 Precedence: list List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 08 Jun 2012 07:33:38 -0000 This is a multi-part message in MIME format. --------------030307090501060706080506 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Please see attached review. I haven't cc'ed the IETF or IESG since my comment is only a process issue, but this can be forwarded as you think fit. If the IESG can see a way round it consistent with RFC 2026, that would be fine by me. 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