[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dots-signal-call-home-11

David Schinazi via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 30 October 2020 23:30 UTC

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Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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Document: draft-ietf-dots-signal-call-home-11
Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review Date: 2020-10-30
IETF LC End Date: 2020-11-12
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Thanks for a clear document, I didn't see any issues from a GenART perspective.

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