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Re: [Gen-art] [Gen-Art] Review: draft-ietf-ace-usecases-07

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 22 October 2015 13:57 UTC

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Thanks for this, Joel. I agree with your suggestion.

Jari

On 16 Oct 2015, at 06:55, Joel M. Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-ace-usecases-07
>    ACE use cases
> Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
> Review Date: 15-Oct-2015
> IETF LC End Date: 22-Oct-2015
> IESG Telechat date: 22-Oct-2015
> 
> Summary: This document is ready to be published as an Informational RFC.
> 
> Major issues: N/A
> 
> Minor issues:
>    I believe ACE should be spelled out in the title.
> 
>    I am mildly concerned that some of the requirements may be undecidable or unmeetable, such as a requirement for easily sanitizing a log to leave needed historical information while removing personal information (U2.12).  I understand the motivation for this.  But I think the document might be helped by a warning about their being conflicting goals within or among some requirements.
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> Nits/editorial comments: N/A
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