Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution-10

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Forwarding on behalf of Alexey.
From: Alexey Melnikov [] 
Sent: 10 May 2015 17:22
Subject: Fwd: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution-10
Hi Adrian,
I am having some problems with the alias expansion. Can you forward to your co-editors?
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[Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution-10

Sun, 10 May 2015 17:18:12 +0100

Alexey Melnikov  <> <>

To:, General Area Review Team  <> <>
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
 <> <>.
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
Document: draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution-10.txt
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 2015-05-10
IETF LC End Date: 2015-04-08
IESG Telechat date: N/A
My apologies for the late review of this document.
Summary: Ready with nits
Minor (but some of these might be more serious):
In 6.2.2:
If an implementation of BGP-LS detects a malformed attribute, then it
    SHOULD use the ’Attribute Discard’ action as per
    [I-D.ietf-idr-error-handling] Section 2.
This needs to be a Normative reference. Or you can keep it as 
Informative, if you change the sentence not to use RFC 2119 language.
In - does this need a new IANA registry? (I am fine if you think 
you don't).
In - what is "subset of the FQDN"?
       The TE Default Metric TLV carries the TE-metric for this link.
       The length of this TLV is fixed at 4 octets.
I am probably showing my ignorance, but is the term "TE-metric" defined 
somewhere? The description below suggests it has substructure, which I 
don't know anything about.
        If a source protocol (e.g.
        IS-IS) does not support a Metric width of 32 bits then the high
        order octet MUST be set to zero.
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