Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-48

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Mon, 12 February 2018 18:55 UTC

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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-48
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Hi Linda,

Thank you for the review! I will fix the editorial nit in the next version of the document.

Regards,

Christer

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Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-48



Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-48

Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2018-02-12
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-?
IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-14

Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

Major issues: none

Minor issues: None


Nits/editorial comments:

Typo: Abstract 3rd paragraph: "RTP header extension that van..."
Do you mean "RTP header extension that can..."?

Linda Dunbar