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From: "King, Daniel" <d.king@lancaster.ac.uk>
To: Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@futurewei.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Hi Linda,

Many thanks for your Gen-ART review of this document. 

We squashed the editorial nit.

Thank you again for taking the time to review the document.

BR, Dan. 

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Subject: [Gen-art] draft-ietf-tvr-requirements-07 ietf last call Genart review

Document: draft-ietf-tvr-requirements
Title: TVR (Time-Variant Routing) Requirements
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-tvr-requirements-07
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2026-02-07
IETF LC End Date: 2026-02-11
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document provides a comprehensive and well structured requirements analysis for Time Variant Routing, with clear terminology and a thorough discussion of temporality, scheduling, and routing considerations.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: None.

Nits/editorial comments:

Typo:
"need scynchronized execution" -> "need synchronized execution".

Best Regards,
Linda

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