Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-flowspec-09

Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Fri, 03 July 2020 12:57 UTC

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Thanks for taking time to so the review, Roni.

Best,
Adrian
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Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-flowspec-09

Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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Document: draft-ietf-pce-pcep-flowspec-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2020-07-03
IETF LC End Date: 2020-07-06
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as standard track RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:

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