[Gen-art] review: draft-housley-sow-author-statistics-00

"Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Thu, 27 August 2015 21:53 UTC

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Document: draft-housley-sow-author-statistics-00
       Statement of Work for Extensions to the IETF Datatracker for
                            Author Statistics
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 27-August-2015
IETF LC End Date: 23-September-2015
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues:
     There are a few references in this document to the format 
evolution.  It seems that either this document should provide for 
additional work as those changes occur, or should indicate that such 
further work will be dealt with separately at the appropriate time.

Nits/editorial comments:
     I wonder if this document could or should identify additional 
metadata items that the new formats could provide to make these 
statistics more reliable.