[Gen-art] Fwd: Re: New Version Notification - draft-ietf-ccamp-flexi-grid-fwk-06.txt

Ramon Casellas <ramon.casellas@cttc.es> Tue, 25 August 2015 09:55 UTC

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-------- Forwarded Message --------
Subject: 	Re: New Version Notification - 
draft-ietf-ccamp-flexi-grid-fwk-06.txt
Date: 	Tue, 25 Aug 2015 11:51:20 +0200
From: 	Ramon Casellas <ramon.casellas@cttc.es>
Organization: 	CTTC
To: 	internet-drafts@ietf.org, mhartley@cisco.com, 
draft-ietf-ccamp-flexi-grid-fwk@ietf.org, ccamp-chairs@ietf.org, 
draft-ietf-ccamp-flexi-grid-fwk.ad@ietf.org, 
draft-ietf-ccamp-flexi-grid-fwk.shepherd@ietf.org, dbrungard@att.com, 
Tina TSOU <Tina.Tsou.Zouting@huawei.com>om>, Black, David 
<david.black@emc.com>om>, Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie>



Dear all

A new version has been upload, addressing the received comments.

Many thanks for your reviews

Ramon, on behalf of the authors


Main changes:

- Further text in the abstract claryfing the use of existing GMPLS
architecture and protocols (Stephen)

- Removed rarely used acronym EFS and expand it where appropriate (David)

- Improve Figure 3, with NCF and n,m (Adrian, David, Fatai)

- Add text for "--" Figure 3 ( David, Adrian)

-  Add text for Figure 4 (David, Adrian)

- Add text elaborating on the media channel composition (David)

- Fix off-by-one in Figure 5 for "X" (David)

- Add ref [RFC3945] for TE link definition (David)

- Fix spotted typos (all)

- Add RSVP-TE to "Path" and "Resv" messages

- Add legends to figure 15 and 16 (Tina)

- Clarify C,S,L bands (David)

- Added note of common practice and discovery (David, Adrian, Tina)


Please cfr.

http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=http://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-ccamp-flexi-grid-fwk-05.txt&url2=http://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-ccamp-flexi-grid-fwk-06.txt

On 08/25/2015 11:35 AM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> A new version (-06) has been submitted for draft-ietf-ccamp-flexi-grid-fwk:
> https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ccamp-flexi-grid-fwk-06.txt
>
>
> The IETF datatracker page for this Internet-Draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-flexi-grid-fwk/
>
> Diff from previous version:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ccamp-flexi-grid-fwk-06
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>
> IETF Secretariat.
>