Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-28

Miika Komu <miika.komu@ericsson.com> Mon, 09 April 2018 12:05 UTC

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To: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>, <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-28
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Hi Roni,

On 04/08/2018 10:32 AM, Roni Even wrote:
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2018-04-08
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-26
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10
> 
> Summary:
> The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with one nit.
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> In section 7 - "a new error type  SERVER_REFLEXIVE_CANDIDATE_ALLOCATION_FAILED
> in Section 5.9." It is in section 5.10

good catch, I'll fix the reference in the next version. Thanks!