[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-clue-datachannel-13

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Wed, 27 July 2016 23:39 UTC

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From: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-clue-datachannel-13
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-clue-datachannel-13.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2016-07-28
IETF LC End Date: 2016-08-01
IESG Telechat date:

Summary: Ready
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Minor issues:
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Mainly for my own education:

3.2.6.  SCTP Multihoming

   SCTP multi-homing is not supported for SCTPoDTLS associations, and
   can therefore not be used for a CLUE data channel.

What is the advantage of SCTP if you don't get the benefit of multihoming?

Nits:
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I expected a reference to draft-ietf-clue-protocol where CLUE is first mentioned
in the Introduction.