[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03

Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Tue, 03 December 2019 06:52 UTC

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From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2019-12-02
IETF LC End Date: 2019-12-02
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC with some issues (I would recommend taking into consideration the comments received on the mailing list)

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
It would have been interesting to have this draft also mention the additional/potential risks for non-web applications. IoT was briefly mentioned in Section 3.6. What about other applications? Is there any other privacy risks beyond just identifying the content being requested?

Very interesting topic.

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
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