[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-09

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Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review result: Ready with Issues

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Document: draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-09
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 2020-09-03
IETF LC End Date: 2020-09-08
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat


Ready with Issues

This document defines a YANG data model for the capabilities of various NSFs in
the I2NSF framework to centrally manage the capabilities of the various NSFs.
This is a very clear and well written document, and the use cases and the
examples also help its readability. The document was already reviewed and found
READY for publication by the YANG Doctors, so I did not perform a detailed YANG
review but rather focused on the Gen-ART specific aspects. A couple of issues
should be discussed and clarified before approval.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

1. In the introduction:

> This YANG data model is based on the
   information model for I2NSF NSF capabilities

So, the YANG data model is based on [I-D.ietf-i2nsf-capability], and the YANG
module references [draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-03] and
[I-D.ietf-i2nsf-sdn-ipsec-flow-protection]. However, these three documents are
listed as Informative References. Without them the document cannot be
understood and implemented, so I believe that these reference should be moved
to Normative References.

2. In the YANG module a few condition capabilities have no REFERENCEs. Where
can the semantics be found?


Nits/editorial comments:

1. Some of the acronyms are not expanded at first occurrence (VoIP, VoLTE,
DDoS, etc. )