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Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> Tue, 02 July 2024 15:03 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-17
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2024-07-02
IETF LC End Date: 2024-07-09
IESG Telechat date: ?

Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.

This document is very well written, and covers everything it should for 
its purpose.

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