[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-lwig-ikev2-minimal

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From: Ronald Bonica <rbonica@juniper.net>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-lwig-ikev2-minimal
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>

Document:                                      draft-ietf-lwig-ikev2-minimal-04
Reviewer:                                        Ron Bonica
Review Date:                                  2015-10-04
IETF LC End Date:                          2015-10-02
IETF Telechat Date:                      TBD

Summary:          This document is ready for publication
                    
Major Issues: None

Minor Issues: None

Editorial Issues: The Author Address Section is misplaced. It should come before the Appendix. The RFC Editor can probably fix that.

Ron Bonica