Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-06.txt

[Peter Psenak <[e-mail]>]

Hi Francis,

I have included your comments in the new version (8) that has been 
published.

thanks,
Peter

On 11/10/18 10:27 , Francis Dupont wrote:
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> Document: draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-06.txt
> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
> Review Date: 20181005
> IETF LC End Date: 20181010
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
>
> Summary: Ready
>
> Major issues: None
>
> Minor issues:
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
>   I reviewed the version 06 but the version 07 is available so I am
> trying to update my comments to the last version:
>   - Abstract page 1: add "(LLS)" after "link-local signalling"
>
>   - Requirement Language: usually it is in its own section in the body.
>    I leave this to the RFC Editor, i.e. if it should be moved (s)he
>    will do this.
>
>   - ToC page 3 and 7 page 5: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
>
>   - 1 page 2: in theory you should introduce the LSA abbrev but as the
>    whole document is about OSPF IMHO there is no strict requirement to
>    introduce OSPF specific common abbrevs...
>
>   - 1 page 3: add "(LLS)" after "link-local signalling"
>    (note the Abstract is independent so the LLS abbrev should be introduced
>     twice and at its first use).
>
>   - Authors' page 7: BE -> Belgium (for consistency with other addresses)
>
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