Re: [Gen-art] [dmarc-ietf] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-arc-protocol-18

Ines Robles <mariainesrobles@googlemail.com> Mon, 05 November 2018 05:11 UTC

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From: Ines Robles <mariainesrobles@googlemail.com>
Date: Mon, 5 Nov 2018 12:10:53 +0700
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [dmarc-ietf] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-arc-protocol-18
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Thank you very much for the corrections!

Ines

On Mon, Nov 5, 2018, 11:33 AM Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org wrote:

> > Nits/editorial comments:
> >
> > Page 18: “ptypes” →types
> > Page 22: “concocted” → connected?
>
> As Scott K says, "ptypes" is correct as written.
>
> "Concocted" is also correct as written.
>
> Barry
>