Re: [Gen-art] Resolution on comments of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Resolution on comments of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10
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Hi, This (I assume still unsubmitted) version addresses my IESG ballot comments. Thanks! Ben. On 11 Dec 2015, at 5:16, Jiangyuanlong wrote: > Hi all, > > Thanks a lot for your reviews. > Based on all the comments received during the IESG evaluation, we have > prepared a tentative version 11 for this draft. > We believe all the comments are resolved, but please check whether you > have any concerns with the texts in this version. > > If there are no further comments, we will upload it as the formal > revision 11 version. > > Best regards, > Yuanlong > >> -----Original Message----- >> From: BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A [mailto:db3546@att.com] >> Sent: Thursday, December 03, 2015 11:03 PM >> To: Jari Arkko >> Cc: Jiangyuanlong; Russ Housley; >> draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree.all@ietf.org; IETF >> Gen-ART; IETF >> Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of >> draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10 >> >> Hi Jari, >> >> Yes, we'll be doing a new revision for addressing other comments. >> >> I've asked for today's telechat if no discusses to mark it as >> approved, revised >> draft needed. >> >> Much thanks Russ for your review! >> >> Deborah >> >> >> Sent from my iPhone >> >>> On Dec 3, 2015, at 1:08 PM, Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> wrote: >>> >>> Many thanks for your detailed review, Russ! >>> >>> Yuanlong, will there be a new draft version or other edits before >>> the draft >>> is approved? >>> >>> Jari >>> >>>> On 17 Nov 2015, at 00:53, Jiangyuanlong <jiangyuanlong@huawei.com> >> wrote: >>>> >>>> Russ, >>>> >>>> Thanks a lot for your review and good observations. >>>> Please see my comments in line. >>>> >>>> Best regards, >>>> Yuanlong >>>> >>>>> -----Original Message----- >>>>> From: Russ Housley [mailto:housley@vigilsec.com] >>>>> Sent: Saturday, November 14, 2015 1:28 AM >>>>> To: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree.all@ietf.org >>>>> Cc: IETF Gen-ART; IETF >>>>> Subject: Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10 >>>>> >>>>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General >>>>> Area Review >>>>> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the >>>>> IESG for >>>>> the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document >>>>> shepherd or AD >>>>> before posting a new version of the draft. >>>>> >>>>> For more information, please see the FAQ at >>>>> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >>>>> >>>>> Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10 >>>>> Reviewer: Russ Housley >>>>> Review Date: 2015-11-13 >>>>> IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-24 >>>>> IESG Telechat date: unknown >>>>> >>>>> Summary: Almost Ready >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Major Concerns: None >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Minor Concerns: >>>>> >>>>> Sections 4.1 and 5.3.1 inclues a reference to [802.1Q-2011]. >>>>> Should this be >>>>> the 2014 version of the document? If not, please add the >>>>> informative >>>>> reference for [802.1Q-2011]. >>>> [YJ] Yes, all these should refer to [802.1Q-2014]. >>>> >>>>> >>>>> Other Editorial Comments: >>>>> >>>>> The Abstract should appear on the title page. >>>> [YJ] OK. >>>> >>>>> Section 3 needs a reference for MEF 6.1: >>>>> s/Specification MEF 6.1/Specification MEF 6.1 [MEF6.1]/ Also, >>>>> [MEF6.1] >>>>> needs to be added as a normative reference. >>>> [YJ] All these will be updated to MEF 6.2. >>>> >>>>> Section 3 needs a reference for IEEE 802.1Q-2003: >>>>> s/B.1.3 of IEEE 802.1Q-2003/B.1.3 of IEEE 802.1Q-2003 >>>>> [802.1Q-2003]/ Also, >>>>> please add an informative reference for [802.1Q-2003]. >>>> [YJ] Yes, we will add an informative reference for [802.1Q-2003]. >>>> >>>>> Third level section headings do not have space between the section >>>>> number >>>>> and the section title. For example: >>>>> s/5.3.1.PW Processing/5.3.1. PW Processing/ >>>> [YJ] OK. >>>> >>>>> In Fig 4, there is room to shift the figure to the right, this >>>>> will allow the "AC" >>>>> labels to fit better on the left: >>>>> >>>>> +----------------------------------------+ >>>>> | VPLS-capable PE model | >>>>> | +---------------+ +------+ | >>>>> | | |==========|TVSI-1|------------ >>>>> +---+ AC | | ------------ |------------ PWs >>>>> |CE |----------| Bridge ------------ |------------ >>>>> +---+ | | | Root & +------+ | >>>>> | | Module | Leaf VLAN o | >>>>> | | | o | >>>>> | | | o | >>>>> | | | o | >>>>> | | | o | >>>>> +---+ AC | | | VLAN-n +------+ | >>>>> |CE |----------| ------------VSI-n |------------- >>>>> +---+ | | |==========| |------------- >>>>> PWs >>>>> | | | ^ | |------------- >>>>> | +---------------+ | +------+ | >>>>> | | | >>>>> +-------------------------|--------------+ >>>>> LAN emulation Interface >>>>> >>>>> Figure 4 A VPLS PE Model for E-Tree with a Single T-VSI >>>> >>>> >>>> [YJ] OK. >>>> >>>> _______________________________________________ >>>> Gen-art mailing list >>>> Gen-art@ietf.org >>>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art >>>
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-pseu… Russ Housley
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-… Mingui Zhang
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-… Sandra Murphy
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-… Sandra Murphy
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-… Mingui Zhang
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-… Donald Eastlake
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-… Donald Eastlake
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-… Russ Housley
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-pseu… Russ Housley
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-… Mingui Zhang
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-… Donald Eastlake
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-… Jari Arkko
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-… Donald Eastlake
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-… Jari Arkko
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-… Steve Crocker
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-… Donald Eastlake
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-… Mingui Zhang
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-mpls-self-… Russ Housley
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-mpls-s… Ronald Bonica
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-lisp-impac… Russ Housley
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-mpls-s… Jari Arkko
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-lisp-i… Luigi Iannone
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-lisp-i… Jari Arkko
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls… Russ Housley
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-… Jiangyuanlong
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-eppext-tmc… Russ Housley
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-… Jari Arkko
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-… BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-… Jiangyuanlong
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-… Jari Arkko
- [Gen-art] Resolution on comments of draft-ietf-l2… Jiangyuanlong
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-edns… Russ Housley
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-… Warren Kumari
- Re: [Gen-art] Resolution on comments of draft-iet… Ben Campbell
- Re: [Gen-art] Resolution on comments of draft-iet… Jiangyuanlong
- Re: [Gen-art] Resolution on comments of draft-iet… Sheng Jiang
- Re: [Gen-art] Resolution on comments of draft-iet… Jiangyuanlong
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-… David C Lawrence
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-… Warren Kumari
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-edns… Russ Housley
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-… Jari Arkko
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-eppext-tmc… Russ Housley
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-eppext… Jari Arkko
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-eppext… Gustavo Lozano
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-eppext… Gustavo Lozano
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-aud… Russ Housley