Re: [Gen-art] [Anima] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-28

Michael Richardson <mcr@sandelman.ca> Mon, 28 October 2019 22:22 UTC

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>A third set of comments
>
>The refine look ok to me (but I still recommend a formal review)
>
>        leaf proximity-registrar-cert {
>         description
>          .. as specified by RFC 5280,
>          .. as specified in ITU-T X.690.
>needs references; I suggest

okay.

RFC5280 is already referenced.
Added:

   [ITU.X690.2015]
              International Telecommunication Union, "Information
              Technology - ASN.1 encoding rules: Specification of Basic
              Encoding Rules (BER), Canonical Encoding Rules (CER) and
              Distinguished Encoding Rules (DER)", ITU-T Recommendation
              X.690, ISO/IEC 8825-1, August 2015,
              <https://www.itu.int/rec/T-REC-X.690/>.


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